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OUTSIDER-CHAPTER 6

OUTSIDER FICTION BY  RAKESH SAHA Chapter 6:- “ H ave anyone informed the police?” A strong and firm voice came down through the stairs and started preliminary diagnosis of the injured patient lying on the stretcher, with his stethoscope. Dr.Amitabha Biswas, one of the top neurosurgeons in India, aged thirty five, wearing the as usual doctor uniform, rimless spectacles on his eyes was not only checking the senseless person but also had a quick look on the nearby persons. “I know Mr.Sushant the SP” Naresh remarked in the middle of checking. “Hmm. Its better you call him now. We are running out of time. He needs to be operated right now.” Dr.Amitabha said clearly to all of them. With immediate effect Mr.Naresh bring out his cell and called the required person at that moment. He can hear the phone was ringing. “Hello. SP Sushant Ranjan speaking.” “Sir. I am Naresh from Vishrantwadi. I hope you can remember me.” “ Yes yes...
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OUTSIDER-CHAPTER-4



OUTSIDER


FICTION BY 


RAKESH SAHA





Chapter 4


“Oh my god !!”
“When did this happened ?”
“Where is the truck driver ?”
“Who is this guy ?”
“It doesn’t seem that he will survive.”
Discontinuous chattering and the continuous glow of the headlight of the truck attract Naina and her mother towards the spot.
Like all the other neighbors of the colony Naina was also shocked to see the ‘bloody’ mishap. For some moment she was paused. She was puzzled. She was firmly looking at the half dead person lying in front of her. Some grieve moments were capturing her mind boldly, aroused her past wounds terribly. 
One another helpless doleful face were groping for help in her memory and incessantly begging “Please save me my child” 

“Naina…Naina…What happened? Are you alright?”
A sudden voice of Bibha shaked up the innocent girl and brought her back to the real world.
“I have to save him” Naina whispered in a low voice.
“What ?” Her mother shouted firmly.
“I will save him in any manner. I am going to bring out the car.”
Bibha hold her agitated girl. “It is a police case. Are you out of your mind?”
“Baba died. What did the police do? Could they save him? Can they save him now? Neither they would be able to save baba nor him”
Bibha’s forceful hand was loosening up. She was stunned after facing those unchangeable truths. For a moment both of them were looking at each other. Naina could see her mother’s wet eye. 
 Drops of tear fell down from her face restlessly. She was helpless….both the time.

A few moments later Naina was in front her mother with the car. The sound of friction of the tires made Bibha alive.
“I don’t want to lose this time amma.” Naina came out of her car and begged to her mother.
Bibha was unable to stop weeping.
“I am sorry dear. I could not understand what you were going through. I also lost my beloved. But I could not do anything. I was helpless. I am so sorry my child.”
“Not only you but also I lost my best man of my life. I can only repent for him today and I am compelled to move on with the fact that we could not save him. But today I feel if we can save this young man then we can console ourselves a little bit. May be Baba is giving us another chance to change the fact. Please come on. Let me do this for Baba.”
Naina dragged her mother slowly and both of them get into the car and then moved to the spot.
“Excuse me. Please help us to get him into the car”
“Are you serious? This is a police case”
“Are you human? This girl is trying to save this ill-fated. We should help her. Please let us get this young man into the car. We will call the police from the hospital.”
Though there was mixed reaction in the crowd, but at the end unconscious Vishal got a scope to get himself into the car.
“I am coming with you. May be you will need help in the hospital” A middle aged man came forward.
“Thank you Naresh uncle. Please hold him with amma and sit in the back seat. I will drive the car to the hospital”
“Alright”
Naina started the car and move it with in a flash of moments. Both of them were terrified to see this kind of driving.
“I have to do it. Please baba give me power to save him. Help me to save you. I will be free. Amma can smile again. Please help us” crying 
Naina was whispering in her mind. Taking breath after breath she was driving frantically. She had taken a look at her watch. 
Time was 4.30 AM. A new dawn was beginning......

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